Look at yourself
You’re beautiful no matter what anyone says
On the inside and out
What’s more important?
The inside
Who cares about the fat on your waist?
The zits on your face?
Or the gap between your legs?
Love yourself on the inside and out
You’re beautiful
:)Great job! The ending was perfect, It had the main idea in the front and at the end of the poem. It holds it all together, Good work!
ReplyDeleteD'aww. :) thanks, lovely.
ReplyDeletewow tiffany this is amazing!!!!
ReplyDeleteShank you. :3
DeleteInspirational!! and quite beautiful poem Tiffany! Love it! :) but now I'm self conscious of gaps between legs!....
DeleteThank you. (: aww. :3 Sorry! D: Don't be self conscious! It's a good thing. (: What I meant was that like, if you don't have one, you still look beautiful with out it. (:
ReplyDeleteGood piece of writing! You present a great message!
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